{"id":521,"date":"2013-12-03T00:31:00","date_gmt":"2013-12-03T00:31:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/2013\/12\/5-tips-for-less-painful-editing\/"},"modified":"2015-07-28T18:29:01","modified_gmt":"2015-07-29T01:29:01","slug":"5-tips-for-less-painful-editing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/2013\/12\/5-tips-for-less-painful-editing\/","title":{"rendered":"5 Tips For Less Painful Editing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>So, as of my writing this (December, though you may see this in the future, hi future!), the National Novel Writing Month just ended and you (the hypothetical you) have just spent the last month putting together the rough draft of your novel. Some of you might have done it for a laugh or just to prove to yourself that you could do it. But I know for a fact there\u2019s a lot of you out there right now who intend to publish or try to publish what you\u2019ve so painstakingly put together. In fact, I\u2019ve heard from multiple sources that the first week in December is one of the busiest times of the year for agencies and publishers as they see a sudden influx of manuscripts.<\/p>\n<p>This is a<i><b> bad<\/b><\/i> idea.<\/p>\n<p>I understand, you\u2019re incredibly enthusiastic about what you just put together. But, please, be aware that you wrote your piece in less time than it takes some casual readers to actually read the thing &#8211; you may want to edit first. And, actually, in the spirit of hyping internet trends that promote writing, remember that <a href=\"http:\/\/pitchmas.blogspot.com\/\">Pitchmas<\/a> is coming.<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><br \/>\nWhat\u2019s Pitchmas? Well, Pitchmas is a magical time when you can take your manuscript and pitch it directly to agents and editors rather than going through the dreaded slush-pile. However, one thing that is an absolute requirement is that your manuscript is <i><b>complete<\/b><\/i> and <i><b>polished<\/b><\/i>. That polished requirement can be a real pain in the ass and not a lot of people are prepared for it.<\/p>\n<p>However, the free-for-all <a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/search?q=%23pitchmas&amp;src=typd\">#pitchmas<\/a> day is the 20th of December this year, so you\u2019ve got a little over two weeks to try to polish your work. Mind you, that\u2019s still not the recommended length for editing time, but I\u2019d rather you do that than submit the very next day.<\/p>\n<p>Unfortunately, <i>no one<\/i> likes to edit. In fact, it\u2019s probably one of the most painful parts of writing. So, let\u2019s talk about how to go about it with minimal meltdowns.<\/p>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\">1. Read it aloud<\/h2>\n<div style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\"><a style=\"margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\" href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/read-bush.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/read-bush-300x236.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"320\" height=\"252\" border=\"0\" \/><\/a><\/div>\n<div style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\"><\/div>\n<p>This is one of the most commonly shared pieces of advice on the internet, so I\u2019m getting out of the way first. When you want to edit your work you\u2019re going to want to read it to yourself, out loud and where you can actually hear your work. This will be one of the fastest ways to detect all of the little hiccups in your grammar, flow and sentence structure. If it sounds awkward when you\u2019re reading it, it sounds awkward when other people are reading it.<\/p>\n<p>It seems like a silly concept at first, but remember that most of the time when you read silently you\u2019re scanning rather than fully comprehending. There\u2019s also a tendency for the way something looks to not perfectly match how it sounds. For the quickest example of this, I share this video:<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/17GbGmDORwk\" width=\"420\" height=\"315\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>That teleprompter led that anchor down a dark road and they couldn\u2019t have possibly known that until they read it out loud. Here\u2019s the stupidest part too, clearly no one ever read it at any step of the production process. You should try to avoid making the same mistake.<\/p>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\">2. Edit for Flow, not Length<\/h2>\n<div style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\"><a style=\"margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\" href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/harry-potter-pages.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/harry-potter-pages-300x210.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"320\" height=\"224\" border=\"0\" \/><\/a><\/div>\n<p>This is an important thing to remember. When you\u2019re reading the story you\u2019re going to notice how easy or hard it is to get from one page to the next. This is what you should focus on. A lot of people on the internet are going to tell you to make the story as short as possible because conventional wisdom has always been that shorter books are more likely to be received well.<\/p>\n<p>This is bullshit.<\/p>\n<p>If you look at the sales figures for the most successful books in the past decade you\u2019ll notice that a lot of them are incredibly long. In fact, by conventional wisdom, JK Rowling was almost never published in the first place because her books tend to be way over 100,000 words. But that would have been a mistake, clearly.<\/p>\n<p>Why is this conventional wisdom then if the numbers say differently? Frankly, it\u2019s because conventional wisdom was created by publishers and publishers had to worry about how much your book would cost to publish. Every page you put to print was additional cost to the bottom line. This meant that publishers would tend to reject manuscripts that were \u201ctoo long\u201d because they were trying to mitigate their risk.<\/p>\n<div style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\"><a style=\"margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\" href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/original.0.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/original.0-300x197.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"320\" height=\"211\" border=\"0\" \/><\/a><\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s a brand-new era however. Print costs can be minimized because of the revolution of eBooks and the audiences in the world have shown that they are perfectly willing to read longer books if those books are good. So focus on your flow more than length. If you wrote this for NaNo you\u2019ll probably only have roughly 50,000 words anyway so any attempt to make it \u201cmore succinct\u201d will cause only harm to your narrative.<\/p>\n<p>I learned this lesson the hard way when working on my <a href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/shards.html\">first novel<\/a> when someone told me that they felt it needed to be 12,000 words shorter than it was. Like an idiot, I started to obsessively cut at it to squeeze that space out of it. The end result was a disjointed, ugly draft that I regretted making. Just because \u201cconventional wisdom\u201d tells you to do something, don\u2019t do it. Also, the same works in reverse, a shorter novel is perfectly fine to submit as well, <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/The_Time_Machine\">The Time Machine <\/a>was roughly only 32 thousand words and that was a classic.<\/p>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\">3. You are your own worst judge<\/h2>\n<div style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\"><a style=\"margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\" href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/Vincent_Willem_van_Gogh_106.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/Vincent_Willem_van_Gogh_106-264x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"282\" height=\"320\" border=\"0\" \/><\/a><\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Another thing to avoid trying to fix when you\u2019re doing the second draft is anything dealing with the plot. It\u2019s perfectly okay to nix smaller scenes, but larger plot elements that you feel aren\u2019t working for you are things you will want to hold off on until the third draft. After all, the person who hates your work more than anyone else is you.<\/p>\n<p>At any given time, any author has the chance of hating about 50% of what they just wrote. It\u2019s inevitable that you\u2019re going to read something you just finished, only to find this strange feeling like you need to rewrite the whole damn thing. This would be a bad thing because you don\u2019t really know whether or not what you just wrote actually works or if you\u2019re just hating on yourself due to insecurity.<\/p>\n<p>In fact, like I said back when I covered <a href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/2013\/11\/five-tips-for-writing-a-solid-mystery\/\">writing mysteries<\/a>, there are some details in your plot that just will never work for yourself the way they work for someone else. You won\u2019t ever be surprised by something you wrote. You won\u2019t be as scared of the monster you cooked up as someone else. You will never be as in awe of any of your truly great ideas as a third party might be. One person in the world has seen every single thing in your novel before: you. It\u2019s incredibly easy to become jaded about that.<\/p>\n<p>So, before you go writing that third draft and changing plot details, it\u2019s a good idea to\u2026<\/p>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\">4. Get a <i>VARIETY <\/i>of Test Readers<\/h2>\n<table style=\"margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; text-align: center;\" cellspacing=\"0\" cellpadding=\"0\" align=\"center\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\"><a style=\"margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;\" href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/diversity.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/diversity-300x204.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"400\" height=\"272\" border=\"0\" \/><\/a><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\">Surely someone in this group has to be able to read.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>After you\u2019ve smoothed out any rough bumps in the flow of your story and you\u2019ve corrected your grammar enough to feel confident in calling what you have a \u201csecond draft\u201d, it\u2019s time for the next stage. Luckily, if you\u2019re planning to publish this or pitch it to an agent then you\u2019re ready to show it to people in general. This is good because it\u2019s time to find a handful of people to read your work and give you honest feedback.<\/p>\n<p>However, <i><b>do not<\/b><\/i> just show it to people who you consider the people that are \u201csafe\u201d. You are going to want a variety of people from different backgrounds and viewpoints that you trust can be honest with you. You\u2019re going to want to find people who have wildly differing opinions on subjects and details. So long as you have a bunch of people with different views, you\u2019ll be able to use them to tell you when something is more than just a matter of perspective, it\u2019s an actual problem.<\/p>\n<p>If one person happens to not like a detail of your story, then that person may just not like that plot device in general. If a whole pack of varied people dislike a plot element, you may have done something wrong with it. That\u2019s when you change it, when a group of people can all agree that there\u2019s something off about that aspect of your story.<\/p>\n<p>And when that feedback does come back, please remember\u2026<\/p>\n<h2 style=\"text-align: center;\">5. Mistakes are only a fraction of your work<\/h2>\n<div style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\"><a style=\"margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\" href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/track-changes.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/track-changes-300x187.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"400\" height=\"250\" border=\"0\" \/><\/a><\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>When you receive feedback from your readers, or a copy with notes on changes they think you should make, it\u2019s going to feel like being in a warzone. You\u2019re going to see a lot of red on that page when they scratch out mistakes and jot down corrections. In fact, it\u2019s not entirely unusual for you to see red marks on every single page of your draft when it gets back to you. That can be overwhelming to look at, even downright crushing. Hell, look at that screenshot above and tell me that you wouldn&#8217;t be a little discouraged seeing that on your screen.<\/p>\n<p>But you have to remember that the mistakes you\u2019ve made don\u2019t make up 100% of the work. The things you did right will always outnumber the things you did wrong. Though it\u2019s entirely possible that you\u2019ve made big mistakes along the way, it isn\u2019t every single line. If that was the case, your readers would have told you to scrap the whole thing rather than mark down the things they thought needed to be changed. The whole page isn\u2019t red, just a few lines and the margins.<\/p>\n<p>So just keep that in mind as you go through this. Never let the fact there&#8217;s editing to be done discourage you. Everyone will have to do this at some point and most of us will have roughly the same amount of editing to do. In fact, I&#8217;d go so far as to say you&#8217;re going to spend as much if not more time editing most drafts than you spent writing the first. So don&#8217;t let the red ink scare you off, only an idiot would think they don&#8217;t need to edit.<\/p>\n<p>And remember, we all make mistakes and they can all be recovered from&#8230;<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" src=\"\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/FtKnTegOIM4\" width=\"400\" height=\"225\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>So try not to get angry about them.<\/p>\n<p>(<i>If you want to see how I fared with editing, feel free to check out <a href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/work\/\" target=\"_blank\">my books<\/a>. Good luck on yours!<\/i>)<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>So, as of my writing this (December, though you may see this in the future, hi future!), the National Novel Writing Month just ended and you (the hypothetical you) have just spent the last month putting together the rough draft of your novel. Some of you might have done it for a laugh or just &hellip; <a href=\"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/2013\/12\/5-tips-for-less-painful-editing\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">5 Tips For Less Painful Editing<\/span> <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":1613,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[17,3],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/521"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=521"}],"version-history":[{"count":5,"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/521\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3757,"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/521\/revisions\/3757"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/1613"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=521"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=521"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jeremyvarner.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=521"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}